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Critiques
As for originality: Hmm... I've seen a lot of things like this, probably I can't really say that this is something new for me.
Well I wouldn't crticize further on the theme since it's not my specialty so I should go on with the technical issues here.
First: The man in black's elbows. I think you got the cloth folds reversed... it should be the other way around. You can compare it with the man in blue's elbows.
Second: The shading detail. I feel like you should add more shading details, especially in the gold part of the chairs near the man's head (the gold, small circle shaped parts). Because these parts quite blended with blue's hand. This could cause the ambiguation of the arm's pose.
Third: A minor one, it's the whip color. I mistook it with a black saber because of the grip and the curve of the whip... until I see the tip. By changing its color to brown or gold, it will be easier to identify it.
Overall, quite nice. One quite visible issue and two minor things, but that doesn't mean this work is not qualified to be a good work though.
Good work, and keep improving.
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