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A fullbody watercolor commission from :iconglompedtodeath:

He asked me to draw his OC,Kaze paired with one of my OC...and cuz he said that Kaze is an aggressive uke type of character...so I decided to pair him up with the sadistic seme type one,Death horsemen:D

wew...I think you might not recognized him very well in this pic without his usual attire^^
As my BF himself and some of my students can't recognized him as Death^^;

Mebbe I lacking of something while did this so he lost his usual essence...-_-

Ho well...it's been a long time for me not making a full BG watercolor pic since my Innocent Trap piccu...I'm having a hard time detailing them all...:iconotlplz:
Not only that...I also RARELY did a fullbody pic with more than 1 person in watercolor...orz...

I also sucked at BG...always PHAILED many times:crying:

But...well...Josh,I hope you like it:D

C&C are ALWAYS welcomed:D

Done in 12 hours(sketching for 2 hours)
Reeves watercolor,Faber Castell Classic Color Pencil
Canson Aquawatercolor Paper 300gsm
BGM:Kamen Rider Kiva musical score,Marilyn Manson's Lest We Forget and Mechanical Animals,Blassreiter Ost

PS:For you who wanna commission a paired piccu of your OC with mine will get a special discount:D

Kaze is:iconglompedtodeath:
Death Horsemen is mine

Critiques


:iconcouncilor:
Good work on this. I noticed some things that a little bit off, but overall I say this is rather good. The Layout is quite nice. and the color theme is quite OK although I would suggest "add more contrast" in overall scene.

As for originality: Hmm... I've seen a lot of things like this, probably I can't really say that this is something new for me.

Well I wouldn't crticize further on the theme since it's not my specialty so I should go on with the technical issues here.

First: The man in black's elbows. I think you got the cloth folds reversed... it should be the other way around. You can compare it with the man in blue's elbows.

Second: The shading detail. I feel like you should add more shading details, especially in the gold part of the chairs near the man's head (the gold, small circle shaped parts). Because these parts quite blended with blue's hand. This could cause the ambiguation of the arm's pose.

Third: A minor one, it's the whip color. I mistook it with a black saber because of the grip and the curve of the whip... until I see the tip. By changing its color to brown or gold, it will be easier to identify it.

Overall, quite nice. One quite visible issue and two minor things, but that doesn't mean this work is not qualified to be a good work though.

Good work, and keep improving.
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:iconfaqy:
wooo...nice work and colours :love:

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:XD: sorry for my very bad English......
:iconcodeblacksleuth:
whoa gosh lurve the colors of the wallz cool clothing!!!
:iconsomi-k:
Wow this is definitely gorgeous!

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Ahn yung ha seh yo! <3
:iconlunaticsupernova:
Thankies very much:D

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Judge it, King tsumugarete kita unmei no Saga
sono ude ni yudanerareta
kiba o muita mono wa eien ni naraku o samayou
What is real? attouteki na
shihai o ima oozora ni shikakete kuru
yuruginai sonzai Roots of the king…
:iconinessa92007:
they r so Kawaiiii XD (cute!)
:iconlunaticsupernova:
Thankies very much^^

But I still have to try to color more neatly^^

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Judge it, King tsumugarete kita unmei no Saga
sono ude ni yudanerareta
kiba o muita mono wa eien ni naraku o samayou
What is real? attouteki na
shihai o ima oozora ni shikakete kuru
yuruginai sonzai Roots of the king…
:iconlunaticsupernova:
LOLWUT!

Kawaii^^;?

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Judge it, King tsumugarete kita unmei no Saga
sono ude ni yudanerareta
kiba o muita mono wa eien ni naraku o samayou
What is real? attouteki na
shihai o ima oozora ni shikakete kuru
yuruginai sonzai Roots of the king…
:iconlacasadreams:
You didnt fail... it was awesome. :drool:

belajar gambar dari mana? soalnya gw punya masalah dengan anatomi dan pose nih... :tears:

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"Any tree can drop an apple. I'll drop the freaking moon."

-Sho Minamoto, The World Ends With You
:iconhisanakuchiki:
I love how you did the background and the shy colour!;)

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Grand Maître de l'Ordre des Commissionneurs Fous^^
:iconmygothiclover:
very beautiful ^^

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Erik: [Hears calotta] My God... this place really *is* haunted! What is *that?*

Gerard Carriere: From the sound, I would say it's Carlotta... the new star.

Erik: She can't sing!

Gerard Carriere: Well, obviously, she doesn't know that.

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